There are lots of students who want to learn English. Also, there are lots of English camps these days. Today, I will compare and contrast two different English camps. There are two camps. They are Camp Big Apple, and another is Ranch West Camp.
First, they are all held abroad. We have to go to another country to attend these camp. Second, we can have fun experiences. In Camp Big Apple, we can go to Broadway shows, tour New York and go to local museums. In Ranch West Camp, we can do horseback riding, river rafting, and lots of fun activities.
There are lots of contrasts. In Camp Big Apple, we study nfor three weeks. However, in Ranch West Camp, we study for four weeks. Also, Camp Big Apple focus on big university exams such as the SAT. On the contrary, Ranch West Camp focuses on finding the talents of the students. When we participate on Camp Big Apple, students live in dormitories. In contrast, students are in home-staying situations when they participate in Ranch West camp.
The camp I would like to go to is Camp Ranch West. We home-stay during the camp.Therefore, we can learn living with foriegn people while homestay. Also, it is located in rural area, so we can breathe fresh air. Also, I can choose the subject which I want to study. Rof these reasons, I prefer Camp Ranch West than Camp Big Apple.
Wednesday, August 17, 2011
Wednesday, August 10, 2011
Skill Posts 2
Summary : Shark Attacks
Many people worry about shark attacks when they go into the water. However, there is very low possibility being attacked by a shark, but chance of fatal attack is very low. Dieng of drowning is rather more than attacked by a shark. Drowning chance is about 1 out of 3.5 million, but chance of shark attack is about 1 out of 11 million. To decrease the chance of getting attacked by a shark, then you have to get out of water when you have cut.
Paraphrase :
Real one :
It is more likely that you will be struck by lightening. In the coastal states of the U.S, about 180 people are struck by lightning every year, but only about 11 people are attacked by sharks. Of those 11 attacks, chanes are that only one of them will be fatal.
Changed one :
The possibility of getting hit by a lightening shot is way more high. Approximately, 180 people are annually
hit by a lightning shot in state near the sea. However, only 11 people get shark attacks at a year. At those counts, only 1 attack will be lethal.
Other Articles
With Internet connectivity extending beyond personal computers and phones to practically all kinds of digital products, including televisions, cameras and household appliances, the smart growth will be stronger and faster this year. It’s a given that mobile computing will turn into the mainstream medium for connecting to the Web.
Summary :
There are lots of digital products which can connect with Internet. It seems that mobile computing will be the most big product.
Paraphrase :
With Internet involvement increasing beyond private computers and phones to usefully all kinds of digital inventions, icluding televisions, cameras and household appliances, the smart increase will be strengthen and rapid this year. Mobile computig will change into the mainstream medium for conecting to the Web.
Many people worry about shark attacks when they go into the water. However, there is very low possibility being attacked by a shark, but chance of fatal attack is very low. Dieng of drowning is rather more than attacked by a shark. Drowning chance is about 1 out of 3.5 million, but chance of shark attack is about 1 out of 11 million. To decrease the chance of getting attacked by a shark, then you have to get out of water when you have cut.
Paraphrase :
Real one :
It is more likely that you will be struck by lightening. In the coastal states of the U.S, about 180 people are struck by lightning every year, but only about 11 people are attacked by sharks. Of those 11 attacks, chanes are that only one of them will be fatal.
Changed one :
The possibility of getting hit by a lightening shot is way more high. Approximately, 180 people are annually
hit by a lightning shot in state near the sea. However, only 11 people get shark attacks at a year. At those counts, only 1 attack will be lethal.
Other Articles
With Internet connectivity extending beyond personal computers and phones to practically all kinds of digital products, including televisions, cameras and household appliances, the smart growth will be stronger and faster this year. It’s a given that mobile computing will turn into the mainstream medium for connecting to the Web.
Summary :
There are lots of digital products which can connect with Internet. It seems that mobile computing will be the most big product.
Paraphrase :
With Internet involvement increasing beyond private computers and phones to usefully all kinds of digital inventions, icluding televisions, cameras and household appliances, the smart increase will be strengthen and rapid this year. Mobile computig will change into the mainstream medium for conecting to the Web.
Monday, August 8, 2011
funny soccer video
This is a video which 100 million people have laughed. Please watch it and laugh a lot!!!
Manchester United vs. Manchester City
Manchester United, which Park Ji Sung is in, wins against Manchester City for 3-2.
Manchester United Fighting!!!
Friday, August 5, 2011
What the world eats
Hello, I live in North Carolina, and we live very affluently. In the morning, I ate apple, and bread with raspberry jam and milk. It was very delicious. After 3hours, I ate chips. The chips were from Mexico, and it was very delicious. At lunch time, I ate hamburger from Burger King. I ate the burger very fast. I was very hungry. Also, I ate coke. After 5 hours, me and my brother ate 2 pizzas. They were peperoni and cheese pizza. I think pizza is a one food that I will love forever. At dinner time, my family made taco and ate. I ate 3 tacos. My brother ate 5 tacos. I think his appetite is very strong. Tomorrow, at dinner, we will do barbeque party. Barbeque is one of my favorite food. However, usually I think of my diet. I sometimes worry of my health, too. Last year, I went to hospital and the doctor said that I had too much cholesterol. I think I have to reduce my diet and think about my health.
I wrote about the photo and I found at here : http://www.time.com/time/photogallery/0,29307,1626519_1373695,00.html
I wrote about the photo and I found at here : http://www.time.com/time/photogallery/0,29307,1626519_1373695,00.html
Wednesday, August 3, 2011
PEOPLE ARE AWESOME
There are lots of people in the world, and there are fantastic people, too. In this video, there are lots of people who are talented in special parts.
Chain Writing
There was a person called Jacobsamleeparadox. He was very bad looking because it had the face which is the mixture of Jacob, sam, lee, paradox. One day, he was walking down the street, and he ate Axel. Then he got Axel's face. But, he wanted to eat more so ate more and got a random person's face. He ate a porcupine's head, so his face was full sith spikes. Then, he stabbed a random pedestrian, and the pedestrian died. The police came there but every policemen died by Jacobsamleeparadox. So, a card player showed up. They made a deal. If he won a card game, he would leave. The game started but even after a day the game didn't end. Not only card player but also Jacobsamleeparadox was very tired. So, they agreed on having the game the day after. That sudden, the card layer fainted because he touchd the poison on the card. Jacobsamleeparadox saw that and he suddenly became a numb and the police came. The ploice thought Jacobsamleeparadox killed him, but then the detective came. Even the detective could not find out what the reason was. Therefore, the detective was killed by Jacobsamleeparadox. Then, Jacobsamleeparadox became a big monster. Then, Jacobsamleeparadox ate police officers. Sadly, Jacobsamleeparadox became just monster Sam. After, Axel came out of his stomach and became Optimus Prime and killed Sam.
Skill Post 2 Big Apple vs Ranch West
There are lots of students who wants to learn English, and there are lots of English camp these days. Today, I want to compare and contrast two different English camps. They are Camp Big Aple, and the another is Ranch West Camp. They have each characteristics.
First, I will compare each camps. I have two comparisons. The first is that they are all abroad. We have to go to another country to attend this camp. The second is that they can have fun experience. In Camp Big Apple, we can go to Broadway shows, tour New York, and go to local museums. Also, In Ranch West, we can do horseback riding, river rafting, and lots of fun activities.
Next, I will contrast each camps. They have lots of contrasts. In Camp Big Apple, we study for three weeks. However, in Ranch West Camp, we study for four weeks. Also, they focus on big university exams such as SAT. On the contrary, Ranch West Camp program focus on finding the talents of the students. Students live in dormitories. In contrast, students are in home-staying situation when they participate on Ranch West camp. I had three contrasts.
To sum up, there were lots of comparisons between two English camps, Camp Big Apple, and Ranch West Camp. Also, there were lots of contrasts, too. There are lots of each strong points and weak points. I compared and made contrasts between two camps.
First, I will compare each camps. I have two comparisons. The first is that they are all abroad. We have to go to another country to attend this camp. The second is that they can have fun experience. In Camp Big Apple, we can go to Broadway shows, tour New York, and go to local museums. Also, In Ranch West, we can do horseback riding, river rafting, and lots of fun activities.
Next, I will contrast each camps. They have lots of contrasts. In Camp Big Apple, we study for three weeks. However, in Ranch West Camp, we study for four weeks. Also, they focus on big university exams such as SAT. On the contrary, Ranch West Camp program focus on finding the talents of the students. Students live in dormitories. In contrast, students are in home-staying situation when they participate on Ranch West camp. I had three contrasts.
To sum up, there were lots of comparisons between two English camps, Camp Big Apple, and Ranch West Camp. Also, there were lots of contrasts, too. There are lots of each strong points and weak points. I compared and made contrasts between two camps.
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