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Summary : Shark Attacks
 Many people worry about shark attacks when they go into the water. However, there is very low possibility being attacked by a shark, but chance of fatal attack is very low. Dieng of drowning is rather more than attacked by a shark. Drowning chance is about 1 out of 3.5 million, but chance of shark attack is about 1 out of 11 million. To decrease the chance of getting attacked by a shark, then you have to get out of water when you have cut.

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Real one :
 It is more likely that you will be struck by lightening. In the coastal states of the U.S, about 180 people are struck by lightning every year, but only about 11 people are attacked by sharks. Of those 11 attacks, chanes are that only one of them will be fatal.
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 The possibility of getting hit by a lightening shot is way more high. Approximately, 180 people are annually
hit by a lightning shot in state near the sea. However, only 11 people get shark attacks at a year. At those counts, only 1 attack will be lethal.


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With Internet connectivity extending beyond personal computers and phones to practically all kinds of digital products, including televisions, cameras and household appliances, the smart growth will be stronger and faster this year. It’s a given that mobile computing will turn into the mainstream medium for connecting to the Web.

Summary :
There are lots of digital products which can connect with Internet. It seems that mobile computing will be the most big product.
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With Internet involvement increasing beyond private computers and phones to usefully all kinds of digital inventions, icluding televisions, cameras and household appliances, the smart increase will be strengthen and rapid this year. Mobile computig will change into the mainstream medium for conecting to the Web.