There are lots of students who wants to learn English, and there are lots of English camp these days. Today, I want to compare and contrast two different English camps. They are Camp Big Aple, and the another is Ranch West Camp. They have each characteristics.
First, I will compare each camps. I have two comparisons. The first is that they are all abroad. We have to go to another country to attend this camp. The second is that they can have fun experience. In Camp Big Apple, we can go to Broadway shows, tour New York, and go to local museums. Also, In Ranch West, we can do horseback riding, river rafting, and lots of fun activities.
Next, I will contrast each camps. They have lots of contrasts. In Camp Big Apple, we study for three weeks. However, in Ranch West Camp, we study for four weeks. Also, they focus on big university exams such as SAT. On the contrary, Ranch West Camp program focus on finding the talents of the students. Students live in dormitories. In contrast, students are in home-staying situation when they participate on Ranch West camp. I had three contrasts.
To sum up, there were lots of comparisons between two English camps, Camp Big Apple, and Ranch West Camp. Also, there were lots of contrasts, too. There are lots of each strong points and weak points. I compared and made contrasts between two camps.
Nice, but the transition words are meant to help your paragraph flow together well. What you have seems like a list. Try to very the sentence length and structure to make it more interesting to read.
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